Thomas Roessler ha scritto:
Here's a version of the text that incorporates most of Esther's changes. I've left out the suggested change to the last paragraph, abouot the "redirection-based" service. I have also shortened the first sentence -- the note on new revenue streams was easy to misunderstand, and made the sentence too long.
Fine for me. -- .oOo.oOo.oOo.oOo vb. Vittorio Bertola - vb [a] bertola.eu.org http://bertola.eu.org/ <-- Vecchio sito, nuovo toblog!