Thanks Wendy, Esther and Thomas. The only thing I may add is - to give a very brief introduction of who ALAC is - just in case for those outside "ICANN community" The AtLarge Advisory Committee (ALAC), consists of 15 members representing individual users inputs from 5 different global regions (North America, Latin and South America, Europe, Africa and Asia) something like that (not accurate enough since I am writing this inside a bullet train from Kyoto to Tokyo). the rest seems pretty good to me. izumi At 22:46 03/10/06 +0200, Thomas Roessler wrote:
Here's a version of the text that incorporates most of Esther's changes. I've left out the suggested change to the last paragraph, abouot the "redirection-based" service. I have also shortened the first sentence -- the note on new revenue streams was easy to misunderstand, and made the sentence too long.